В стихах ритм должен быть, хотябы корявый. А так это не стих.Добавлено (17.03.2008, 13:57)
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Я бы мог нормальный девиз написать в стихах, но не хочу, глупо. Не нормальный вариант писал выше. Не по теме: у мерлина мэнсона есть песня Nobodies
Today I'm dirty
I want to to be pretty
Tomorrow I know, I'm just dirt
Today I'm dirty
I want to to be pretty
Tomorrow I know, I'm just dirt
We are the nobodies
Wanna be somebodies
We're dead, we know just who we are
We are the nobodies
Wanna be somebodies
We're dead, we know just who we are
Yesterday I was dirty
Wanted to be pretty
I know now that I'm forever dirt
Yesterday I was dirty
Wanted to be pretty
I know now that I'm forever dirt
We are the nobodies
Wanna be somebodies
We're dead, we know just who we are
We are the nobodies
Wanna be somebodies
We're dead, we know just who we are
Some children died the other day
We feed machines and then we pray
Look up and down mortified
You should have seen the ratings that day
Some children died the other day
We feed machines and then we pray
Look up and down mortified
You should have seen the ratings that day
We are the nobodies
Wanna be somebodies
We're dead, we know just who we are
We are the nobodies
Wanna be somebodies
We're dead, we know just who we are
We are the nobodies
Wanna be somebodies
We're dead, we know just who we are
We are the nobodies
Wanna be somebodies
We're dead, we know just who we are
Я бы перевел так... Мы никто, хотим быть кем-то, мы мертвы, мы знаем кто мы есть. Не художественно, чисто, чтобы смысл был понятен. У меня есть акустика к этой песни, звучит красиво, не как обычно у этого исполнителя, музыка просто гитара, не отпугивает, а главное - очень в тему. Может вставим куда-нить?
